The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/16
You have woven with words a beautiful tapestry of truth.
Well Done.
This piece weaves a beautiful illustration of the tapestry of life.
02/21/16
I enjoyed the thoughts prompted by your offering. "It is, as His robe, seamless" sent me dreaming of the longest curtain, stretching from the beginning of time, and the thought that I belonged in it, somewhere. "And babes that should have been, but are not, none are forgotten", was also a dream-starter.
As the tapestry is an idea tackled by many, it risks being a read that you skim over. Perhaps to make yours stand-out, you could go for the new thoughts (those I mentioned among them) and develop them more? Just a thought..