The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/16
This is beautiful. You've painted a brilliant picture of love, family and appreciation of the Lord's abundant harvest. Well done. May you rate highly.
God Bless
02/11/16
Picking fruit is hard work, but the rewards are delectable.

I enjoyed how family and food are interwoven in this story.
You painted a beautiful picture of how much you loved your family. Picking fruit is very hard work.I once picked grapes for a day when I was a young teenager thinking of all the money I would make. I think I earned a $0.25 for all that work.
02/18/16
Awww...I loved this!
Blessings~
Congratulations on ranking 8th in your level. Happy Dance.
Congratulations on your eighth place finish. I liked the ending regardind delicious apples.
02/19/16
Thanks for the supportive comments. I am happy with this result considering it is the first time I have entered a story in this level.