The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
God sends us people in our time of need, sometimes even angels.
02/05/16
Touching and well written!

God bless~
02/05/16
I liked your descriptions and colloquialisms (that's probably spelled wrong). You built up the tension well.
02/11/16
I got a real sense of the scene from your descriptions. I found myself interested in what would happen to her and wondered who these young women were. Well done!
02/11/16
Congratulations Anne for winning 2nd place!
Well done. God Bless
Anne, Congratulations on your EC award. Excellent descriptions of the sights surrounding the train depot.
02/11/16
Congratulations, Anne, on your 2nd place in the Advanced Category. I loved my time waiting with Eleanor and Irma.
02/11/16
Congratulations on your 7th place EC award, Anne.
02/12/16
Congratulations on your Ec, for this very absorbing but understated story.
02/22/16
I enjoyed your precious story of angels unaware.