The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/16
Very creative take on this week's topic. I enjoyed the travelers from your viewpoint while looking out the window.
02/05/16
Unique approach to this weeks topic, well done.

God bless~
02/05/16
I could be wrong about this but it seems as though you start out in the present tense and then go back to the past tense. But basically I enjoyed it. There was one awkward sentence. I should have written it down because now I have forgotten it.
02/05/16
Okay it was the first sentence about the man whose repair was near yours.
02/11/16
Congratulations Sharon on your 3rd place win!!
Great Job and God Bless.
02/11/16
Congratulations on your 3rd place in the Advanced Category.

I really enjoyed the people and scenes outside your window.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 13 overall! Happy Dance!