The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
The rebel's road usually leads to destruction; I am glad this traveler found the light.

I think a few punctuation marks would have helped with readability.
02/05/16
Great job!

I loved this.

God bless~
02/06/16
I really enjoyed this writing piece, but without the punctuation marks the reader may tend to read your work too quickly. For full effect, commas and full stops would have slowed me down so that the words had greater impact. Otherwise, well written.
02/08/16
I like the title. It flows a bit choppy but it has a great message.