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02/04/16
I enjoyed the contemporary retelling of this parable.
02/05/16
Great job, thanks for sharing this well known biblical story.

God bless~
02/05/16
That was an interesting way of bringing the parable to life. You did a great job.
02/05/16
Great imaginative and creative analogy presented about this parable. Well done.
02/05/16
You have written a story with great messages. I enjoyed your creativity to modernize a parable of old. We can all learn/be reminded of the importance of being prepared and ready—not to mention that when we give our word, that it means something to others. Well done.
02/07/16
I really enjoyed this story. Your descriptions and use of speech were well done. And at the end, the Biblical parallel. Thank you.
Il liked the modernization of the parable. You made it come alive.
02/07/16
Wonderful retelling of the bible parable. You really drew the line between being prepared or just not caring enough to get ready.
02/08/16
Wow! I did not see that parable twist coming at the end :-) great job rounding this piece off with a nice lesson .
Imaginative way to retell a familiar story in the Bible. We need to be ready. Well-written
02/09/16
I love when a writer catches me by surprise! Love that parable twist at the end. You worked it in perfectly!

Blessings,
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