The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/16
Your sister sounds like a lovely young woman with a passion and heart for the Lord. She has had more adventures in her 30 years then most people have in a lifetime.
02/05/16
This story touched my heart...thanks for sharing.

God bless~
02/05/16
Well done. I would love to know your sister. Enjoyed this.
02/05/16
What an inspiration she must be! This story was well-written. I particularly like the way you invite the reader to 'picture this' or 'listen to this' drawing us into the story. Thanks.
02/05/16
Wow! Your sister is such an intriguing person, at least that's what your story leads me to believe :-) I assume you've rendered her very well. Such an easy read that maybe want to go exploring right now. Well done, I hope your sister gets to read this
Your sister sounds amazing. You drew with words an excellent picture of her.
02/07/16
Wonderful descriptions. What you failed to mention is how she probably looks at you with that same kind of admiration. Well done.
02/08/16
What a beautiful tribute to your sister! I enjoyed reading about her, but what moved me more was how your love for her beamed through your writing.
02/11/16
Congratulations Nicki,
WOW, what a wonderful tribute to your sister. What an inspiration your story of her is. Great Job.
God Bless you both.
02/11/16
Congratulations, Nicky, on your 1st place in the Advanced Category.

Your sister is truly an inspiration.
02/11/16
Congratulations on your 4th place EC award, Nicki.
Congratulations on both your Advanced win as well as your EC award.
The love you share your sister is infectious. Her exuberance of life shines throughout the story.
02/12/16
Absorbing writing on many levels.
Congrats on your EC placing.
02/13/16
Wow! Nicki - Thanks for this. Congratulations on your 4th place EC win. Beautiful job.
02/22/16
I hope you are sharing your lovely tribute with your sister!