The Official Writing Challenge
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02/04/16
Wow, I could feel the tension so strong all through this piece. Great descriptions.
Can't wait to read more.
02/04/16
Mesmerizing piece of writing. I really liked the ending.
02/05/16
One word..."Excellent."


God Bless~
02/05/16
One word..."Excellent."


God Bless~
02/05/16
Bexley's War becomes the reader's war. You have taken us into your world and held us there in the same suspense and anguish. Great piece of work.
02/09/16
A wonderful piece of literature--captivating from start to finish.

I can't wait to read more of your work.

Good luck in the competition and many blessings!
02/10/16
Great stuff!!!!!!! I loved the description of the backpack and the plight of the character carried the piece through to the end without a hitch!!!!

My favorite was your description of the asphalt; 'grainy'. Just perfect:) I could feel it against my back, lol.

Well done and bravo and encore;)