The Official Writing Challenge
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02/05/16
Very captivating. It sounds like you have many wonderful stories of travel to write about. Only suggestion I have is to put a space between each person's dialogue. Well done.
02/05/16
I liked how you evoked the senses in this story. I'm glad grandma and the MC got home to their beloved Finland.
02/05/16
Wow- beautifully written this inspiring and heartfelt story.

God bless~
02/05/16
I enjoyed this. You did a good job of making us experience the trip with you.

Red ink:dining room WAS set - spacing
02/06/16
This story moved along at a good pace taking the reader from one scene to the next with continuous movement. Great to travel along with you!
Congratulations on ranking 7th in your level. Happy Dance!