The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
Amen! Great job, I loved the message and the heart of this entry.

God bless~
01/29/16
good devotional thoughts - 3rd sentence, I think would is incorrect -maybe will be
01/31/16
The hardest lessons are sometimes only learned when the worst happens.

Great opener to get your point across.
Interesting example from the animal Kingdom. The opening poem could use a little work in terms of flow and rhythm but I thought this was a very original take on the topic.