The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
My heart ached reading this story...but the conclusion summed it up beautifully.

God bless~
01/29/16
Sounds like a real crazy bunch. I don't know if it is true, but if it is you somehow dodged the bullet. I enjoyed the story. The ending seemed like a tag along. That was a criticism I received last week, so don't take it wrong. Keep writing.
01/29/16
I just noticed that it is true, so congrats on ending up normal.
01/30/16
This is so rich with vivid descriptions. So entertaining as well. These are the kind of experiences most only hear about. What a great read. Thank you so much for sharing.
01/31/16
The Georgia family sounds right out of the Hatfields and the McCoys. Only they were all in the same line.

I respect their loyalty, but find it misplaced in this instance.

Well written.