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My heart ached reading this story...but the conclusion summed it up beautifully.

God bless~
Sounds like a real crazy bunch. I don't know if it is true, but if it is you somehow dodged the bullet. I enjoyed the story. The ending seemed like a tag along. That was a criticism I received last week, so don't take it wrong. Keep writing.
I just noticed that it is true, so congrats on ending up normal.
This is so rich with vivid descriptions. So entertaining as well. These are the kind of experiences most only hear about. What a great read. Thank you so much for sharing.
The Georgia family sounds right out of the Hatfields and the McCoys. Only they were all in the same line.

I respect their loyalty, but find it misplaced in this instance.

Well written.