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01/29/16
I really enjoyed this!


God bless~
01/29/16
Nice. At the end you repeated warmth of the fire, I think in 2 consecutive sentences.Maybe you could think of another phrase to avoid the repetition. That's my only red ink.
01/30/16
This is a heartwarming little story. How blessed you are to have so many generations still enjoying being together. Thank you so much for sharing.
God Bless
01/30/16
A well constructed piece of writing. A great read.
01/31/16
My mom used to say that to me, too. It really is a good idea.
I'm glad you have such a large, close family.
A lovely anecdote. I like how you concluded it.
Makes me want to go outside tonight, build a fire and roast marshmallows. I used to love sitting around the fire singing with my family as I grew up. Thanks for reminding me of those pleasant times.

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