The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written devotional. Our relationship with God does focus on our obedience to Him.
This makes some good solid points and is a very good message.
However, my understanding is that starting any article with quoting scripture is not a good idea. Why?
Look to Jan's writing lessons in the forum for the answer. She explains it very well. Keep writing!
Good thoughts. For some reason, which I don't know what, it didn't grab me as I would have liked it to do.
Great devotional!

God bless~

God Bless~
Congratulation on your 3rd place award in the Advanced category, Ernest.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 14 overall. Happy Dance!
Congratulations on your win!

I love your devotion. Sometimes we get in the mindset that we always have to be doing something. Lately, God has been using a number of ways, including your devotion, to tell me that right now I need to be still.

I know God has gifted me as a writer; so I am waiting on him to show me how he wants me to use that gifting.

Your example of a toddler learning to walk tied your message together nicely as well.