The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/16
Pleasant to read. I liked the message to take life, one step at a time.

For better readability double-spacing between paragraphs helps.
01/15/16
I enjoyed the poetic qualities in this story. My red ink suggestion is to watch your punctuation and run on sentences.
Keep writing.
01/19/16
Beautiful message!

Lovely and inspiring.

God bless~
01/21/16
Good message. Nothing works until you call upon the Holy One.
01/21/16
Good message. Nothing works until you call upon the Holy One.