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01/14/16
The title drew me in and I was inspired from there. What thoughtful words from your daughter.

I don't believe any family is exactly cookie-cutter. Even the original family had a murderer.
01/15/16
Great take on the topic and a wonderful testimony. Sounds like you were caught up in a whirlwind of emotions that day. I love your humor. My one red ink suggestion is to watch your punctuation and proper usage of colons.
God Bless.
01/18/16
Thank you for helping us realize that things that are different can also be good. Your story had a good flow and kept me interested.
01/19/16
This was a great read with such a powerful message that was crystal clear!

Well done!

God bless~
01/21/16
Congratulations on your highly commendable award in the Advanced category.

Your story had a wonderful message.