The Official Writing Challenge
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01/14/16
tender story - not sure how closely it adhered to the topic for this week, but maybe that's just me
01/14/16
I liked your sentimental story. Paul sounds like a wonderful husband.
01/18/16
Thank you for your submission! Tender story about reversing the parental roles. ...I might be in that position one of these days! Enjoyable dialogue too!
01/19/16
Awww! What beautiful sentiments in this poignant and moving story.

God has blessed Paul and you as evidenced by your hearts and vision.

Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
01/19/16
This is an 'awww' story. Always hoped that kind of marriage would be mine. So glad it has happened to you. It gives me hope.
01/21/16
Congratulations on your 2nd place in the Advanced category, Francie.

Thank you for your comments and encouragement on my writing.

You have a gift with writing identifiable characters. Can't wait to read more
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 17 overall!