The Official Writing Challenge
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tender story - not sure how closely it adhered to the topic for this week, but maybe that's just me
I liked your sentimental story. Paul sounds like a wonderful husband.
Thank you for your submission! Tender story about reversing the parental roles. ...I might be in that position one of these days! Enjoyable dialogue too!
Awww! What beautiful sentiments in this poignant and moving story.

God has blessed Paul and you as evidenced by your hearts and vision.

Thanks for sharing.

God bless~
This is an 'awww' story. Always hoped that kind of marriage would be mine. So glad it has happened to you. It gives me hope.
Congratulations on your 2nd place in the Advanced category, Francie.

Thank you for your comments and encouragement on my writing.

You have a gift with writing identifiable characters. Can't wait to read more
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 17 overall!