The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/15
You envoked delightful sensations. I especially enjoyed the line "sun's first morning kiss on the cold ground."
12/12/15
Wow- What an amazingly beautiful multi-layered piece!

The words were poetically inspired, and the meaning, and depth, beyond words.

I loved this! I hope it garners attention from the judges.

Profound!

God bless~
This was a touching and profound story. It definitely was on topic.
12/16/15
Great use of topic. So nostalgic in feel and tone. Wonderful message and beautiful choice of words. Thanks for sharing.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 17 overall. Happy Dance!