The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem. I loved the first few lines: "Lost in my yesterdays, in all the things I've done."

I believe there is a few lines that need to be reworked because they were a bit confusing to me. A steam can off of me. It smelled so very bad.

The words were moving and touched my heart.
12/11/15
So uplifting and inspirational! Well done.

God bless~
12/12/15
Very relatable poem--living in the past can take the steam off of living in the present
12/16/15
I don't say much about poems because I feel I know so little. I do know what I like and I like your poem.

Lots of emotion and truth woven into you lovely choice of words.

Thanks.