The Official Writing Challenge
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12/04/15
This was a good devotional but I noticed some grammatical errors, esp. in para. 5.
12/05/15
Thanks for sharing your devotional with us. You did a good job of bringing the scripture into the here and now. We all need to be able to apply scripture to our everyday lives.
12/05/15
Beautiful read concerning the familiar Biblical story. Certainly on topic and well done.

God bless~
You made some great points. I liked the way you introduced the topic with a modern recipe. You had some tense issues that if you read aloud, I think you'd have caught them. Your prayer was powerful and really touched my heart.
This would make a great devotional. You made some excellent points. The judges may mark you down in originally since you retold a familiar Bible story in a way that has been done before. The judges indicated to me that a better angle may be to have an outside person witness the events of Esau. This was a interesting read.