The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a good devotional but I noticed some grammatical errors, esp. in para. 5.
Thanks for sharing your devotional with us. You did a good job of bringing the scripture into the here and now. We all need to be able to apply scripture to our everyday lives.
Beautiful read concerning the familiar Biblical story. Certainly on topic and well done.

God bless~
You made some great points. I liked the way you introduced the topic with a modern recipe. You had some tense issues that if you read aloud, I think you'd have caught them. Your prayer was powerful and really touched my heart.
This would make a great devotional. You made some excellent points. The judges may mark you down in originally since you retold a familiar Bible story in a way that has been done before. The judges indicated to me that a better angle may be to have an outside person witness the events of Esau. This was a interesting read.