The Official Writing Challenge
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12/03/15
Great message in your poem.


Red ink:

You still can['t] make it so.

planed [planned]
Great message in your poem. Man own efforts fail if God is a part of them. Although the Bible says a piece of fruit, it doesn't specifically say an apple.
Great message in your poem. Man own efforts fail if God is a part of them. Although the Bible says a piece of fruit, and doesn't say apple.
12/04/15
Excellent!
God bless~
12/05/15
Thanks for sharing your interesting poem. I too like the message. Your poem has a nice flow and is easy to read.
This is lovely. It has a nice rustic feel about it. It flows off the page nicely.