The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/15
Thanks for a story that throws such a warm and descritpive light into a threatening scenario. Good work.
11/30/15
Whoah! I didn't see that coming.

You kept me interested from the start to the finish. Great flow and wonderful ending!

This is my kind of story. I hope the judges like it as much as I did.

Good luck and God Bless!

12/01/15
This story was captivating from beginning to ending. I imagined a completely different ending, but I was pleasantly surprised.

12/02/15
This was excellent! Well done, I was mesmerized from start to end.

God Bless~
You did a great job of building the suspense. You started off with a bang and propelled me through the story.
I had no idea where you were going, and your title was catchy. Good job!
12/03/15
Congratulations, Francie. I couldn't be happier.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 13 overall! I knew I liked this. Happy Dance!