The Official Writing Challenge
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11/19/15
Beautiful story. Well written. I have no red ink.
11/20/15
Wonderful love story and very nicely done. Blessings, LaVonne
11/21/15
You've packed a lot into your 744 words - as an introduction to a very promising novel. Loaded with credibility.
11/21/15
Interesting and well written. I enjoyed this very much.
I loved this one. I'm glad for my guy; it reminds me of another time in my life when I didn't. Well written, nice build up and ending that ties things together nicely.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 15 overall! Happy Dance!