The Official Writing Challenge
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11/13/15
A nice story of reducing all the baggage one tends to collect over the years. Also a story of addition with the wife tally climbing. :)))))
11/13/15
Great job with the character descriptions and development! It makes me want to meet Loretka.
11/18/15
Nicely done. I liked the characters and how you brought out their personalities.