The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/15
No matter what struggles we go through, we need to trust God to help us. I can relate to working several jobs at a time, having lost a home, and the struggles of owning a business.

Maybe you could explain more how God gave the victory in each situation. I also think you could make a separate story for each one instead of crowding too much into a few words.

So thankful God is working in your life. Keep trusting Him and keep writing. God bless! LaVonne
11/12/15
This story is jam-packed full of information. What challenges you have faced are well worth writing about. I suggest you narrow it down a bit and give the reader smaller bits to process. Keep it up. You have a lot of meaningful stories to share. God Bless you in your writing.