The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/15
Interesting story. You made us feel her despair and the hope she acquired. Nice descriptions.
11/08/15
I like your descriptions of the cabin and its surroundings. I almost felt the chill. Seems like when we are pondering life, we notice our surroundings more. I enjoyed your story.

Blessings, LaVonne
11/12/15
This is excellent! Masterfully written! I wish I could write like you. I want to go to that place, walk the road, and make a fire in that cabin. Thank you for sharing your marvelous gift.
11/13/15
Congratulations on 2nd place.
Well deserved.
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