The Official Writing Challenge
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11/05/15
You portray, quite well, many neighborhoods these days. It really can be an icy reception as the new folks on the block. I liked your story. It flowed well, and the ending was not predictable. Nice job.
11/06/15
How interesting that when we reach out and give, that we always seem to expect something in return. I'm so glad God just loves us no matter what. Nice story.
11/06/15
That was a little bit different take. I enjoyed it and someone else said the ending was unexpected.
This well written and timely piece shows well how we can do our part to change the "chill" in a neighborhood.
11/09/15
Maybe the neighbour hood is the rebel kid who lives next door - but thanks for sharing your efforts to break the ice. Well written.
11/09/15
Maybe the neighbour hood is the rebel kid who lives next door - but thanks for sharing your efforts to break the ice. Well written.
You've captured very well how it takes someone yo step out and build community. Well done!