The Official Writing Challenge
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A masterfully written poem of heartache and triumph. I thought it was a beautifully written poem on a difficult topic. My heart goes out to those women and men who are taken captive against their will. Many of them young children who have been caged or beaten
I thought your poem raised the issue very well. It hit my emotions and even without reading the facts, iI couldn't walk away unmoved after reading this piece. That is the mark of something special. Awesome job.
11/03/15
I feel for those who are enslaved against their will. Thank you for bringing their plight to my notice through your well written poem.
Congratulations on your 5th place finish in the advanced level.A tender and sensitively written poem.
11/05/15
Your haunting poem does bring awareness to what is a heart-breaking reality for many. Excellent work. Congrats on your ribbon!