The Official Writing Challenge
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Sweet story and good reminder to praise. You wrote it very nicely with no major issues that popped out at me.
This is a message we all need to hear. You showed your chosen scripture clearly and I think this piece is a good example of how effective a short piece can be. Great job!
This is a lovely devotion. You might need to cut a few words, but I'd encourage you to submit it to FW daily devotions (the word limit is 300). I like how you started out with a real life story and transitioned into a great biblical message. Your last line is a great lesson for those leaving feedback in the challenge. Congratulations on ranking 3rd in level three and 17 overall. Happy Dance!