The Official Writing Challenge
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10/30/15
Your way sounds good to me. I have trouble mixing in with the crowd and I'm sure many others do as well.
It is a lot like writing. You have to find your own style and that's what makes your writing stand out from the crowd. I liked your last line. Blessings, LaVonne
I loved your descriptions and the images you created. Great work!
11/03/15
I also know the feeling. A room full of strangers, me feeling very obvious as the newcomer and trying to break into groups that are talking, trying not to stand out. Painful. I hate that feeling of not belonging or trying to break into a new social group. A great story with a nice ending.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 18 overall! Happy Dance!