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I love the way you've used an incident that many of us can relate to to ask a far deeper question. I like the way this comes up so naturally without a hint of preachiness. It's definitely given me food for thought today. Great piece!
I can relate to this completely! I suggest not naming the app. This would make a great devotional.
Good devotional. Para. 2 I think base should be bass. And in the last para. non-sense shouldn't have a hyphen but they may have happened due to one of the computer's idiosyncrasies (and I may have spelled that wrong).
Wonderful piece of work. A punch straight on the fact that Jesus alone is the way, the truth and life.