The Official Writing Challenge
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10/16/15
This story was very inspirational; however, I wasn't sure how it related to this week's topic, Fold. I could definitely see it in last week's entries when the topic was Zest.
This was an inspiring story how the Bible can affect a person to change.
10/18/15
I get how your story relates to the topic, because I wrote mine about the same thing. The folding of the business is the theme of the story, and you did a great job with it. I love your happy ending.
I liked how you created mystery and then concluded with a happy ending.
I enjoyed this story. Although the title gave the ending away, it was a fun read. Well done.
10/21/15
My husband is a Gideon so the desire for a Bible resonated especially. It was a lovely story, and you did a good job with it.