The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/15
I fell in love with your MC, Mrs. Gainey. Her positive spirit was
a witness to the world.

Suggestions:

but she was the most beautiful person I have [had] ever met.

For all intents and purposes [wordy] - Basically

Change the ending - it seemed anti-climatic.
10/08/15
I would love to have known Mrs. Gainey. Thank God people like her really do exist. I appreciate your hard work. Best of luck in the Challenge!
This is a lovely devotion. You grabbed me with your opening line by creating a great visual. Your Mrs. Gainey is the quintessential zesty for God person. You did a nice job of showing what the topic is all about. I also really liked that you ended with a prayer, a beautiful and heartfelt one too.
10/10/15
Wow! - Powerful, moving, fulling engrossing and a wonderful tribute to Mrs. Gains. Excellent. Thank you for sharing her with us...she was quite special indeed.

God bless~
10/10/15
So sorry..."Mrs. Gainey."
10/11/15
adventures "passed" should probably be "past". I loved the story though.
Congratulations on ranking 3rd in your level and 16 overall! Happy Dance!