The Official Writing Challenge
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10/08/15

Amen. Good job. Ain't Jesus awesome?
This is quite lovely. I like how you take the reader from a place of darkness to hope to the light. Try to avoid using interrobangs (?!), instead let your wonderful words do the exclaiming. You did a nice job of writing on topic and I could totally relate to this delightful poem.
10/10/15
Inspirational and lovely.

God bless~