The Official Writing Challenge
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09/03/15
Loved this!

God bless~
09/03/15
A good lesson in not judging a situation by it's looks. Only when we take time to understand first can we truly appreciate what lays right before our eyes. Nice job.
09/04/15
I like the way you tease the reader with so many out-of-place details, heightening the sense of mystery and ending with a satisfying denouement.
This kept the reader guessing right up to the end. I didnt know where this story was going but you brought it to a good and interesting conclusion. Well done.
09/09/15
I really enjoyed this story and the ending took me by surprise. I like the positive message you've brought in. Well written.
Outstanding. I loved the way you built the suspense. The pacing was perfect. The ending was brilliant. Because of the prison letters, I thought their room would overtook a prison so families might feel close to their relatives. Your edge is way better. I think it's a great idea too. You nailed the topic and your story was unique and carried a beautiful message.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 13 overall! Happy Dance!