The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a beautifully illustrated story of a jungle safari. I felt I was there travelling with the tour guide. I learned about the culture and the animals that were seen.
08/20/15
Thank you for letting us ride with you on safari. So descriptive and full of energy. Informative to, as the "merr" of the wildebeeste was complete gnus to me. A sobering touch as well, with the cultural clash of your Christian freedom with the threat that your driver faced if he opened his heart to believe. Great writing.
Congratulations on ranking 6th in your level! Happy Dance!
Congratulations on your 6th place finish in the advanced level.