The Official Writing Challenge
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08/23/15
Brrrrr! You made me shiver with all that white stuff. This is an interesting account of your adventures to date. I'm sure you will have many more to tell so I will look forward to reading them. If you put space between the paragraphs it makes it easier on the reader's eye, but it didn't detract from your story.
This sounds a fascinating story, and could well fill a book. You've managed to pack so much into just 750 words and not compromise the quality of description. This is very well done.
08/26/15
First of all, I had forgotten about that thing called winter :/ Second, I was glad to hear of how the Lord lead you in your travels. I thought the final line was a good closing to a good article. well done;) glad you entered!
This is really lovely. You did a great job of showing the difference between the two lands. I live in Western NY where there are cold and brutal winters. I wouldn't want to live anywhere else, but boy am I ready for spring when it comes. Your story made me smile and reminded me to appreciate the heat today because soon it will be a snow-covered winter land once more. The best part is knowing God is always with us whether we live in the northern hemisphere or in the southern. He walks with us always and you did a great job of making that point.