The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/15
What a bunch of sweet memories. I especially loved the note on the back of the photo.
07/26/15
Evocative material that weaves in some golden oldies, and adds extra depth with the message on the back of the photo.
A couple of typos distract from the effect, but not too much.
07/26/15
Good stuff alan!!! aside from the doubles of certain letters and words, this was a pleasant piece. The ending is what made it though. It lent credibility to everything said in the body of the piece. Well crafted:)
07/27/15
Aw, what a tender and touching story-within-a-story. I like the layered effects of the current plot line telling about the story that happened years before.
07/27/15
I enjoyed this story. It took me back to my younger days in the 60's. I've still got my admission stub for the Beatles concert. A unique take on the topic.