The Official Writing Challenge
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What a bunch of sweet memories. I especially loved the note on the back of the photo.
Evocative material that weaves in some golden oldies, and adds extra depth with the message on the back of the photo.
A couple of typos distract from the effect, but not too much.
Good stuff alan!!! aside from the doubles of certain letters and words, this was a pleasant piece. The ending is what made it though. It lent credibility to everything said in the body of the piece. Well crafted:)
Aw, what a tender and touching story-within-a-story. I like the layered effects of the current plot line telling about the story that happened years before.
I enjoyed this story. It took me back to my younger days in the 60's. I've still got my admission stub for the Beatles concert. A unique take on the topic.