The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/15
This sounds like a truly beautiful experience! I could picture the activity and sounds as I was reading.

On a technical note, maybe watch how often you use the word 'and'. It can be a good stylistic mechanism, but can also be a little distracting.
07/30/15
Congrats on your HC. Good job.
Congratulations on ranking 4th in your level and 18 overall! The highest rankings can be found on the message boards.
07/31/15
Congrats Stanley!
God bless~