The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow. Powerful with so much force and turns! My mouth is still open. Good job ...
07/16/15
You captured something that happens in the lives of pastors and their families. Powerful message here. Interesting use of the topic. Thanks
07/17/15
Brilliant piece of writing. Excellent job all the way through...and concluded with depth and vision.

God bless~
07/17/15
Really creative take. Well written and great ending.
07/18/15
Lovely
07/19/15
Bravo! now that you have your username you might consider entering more than once a year;) You'd do fairly well, I'd wager.
07/19/15
I agree with the others, a powerful piece, well written and leaving much to think about. Well done!
I'm not really sure what to say to this piece.

It's powerful to state what's already been stated.

This is a really interesting take on the topic. Who is really the ugly tourist? The homeless person who is always passing through or the pastor's wife who needs to do a self-check. I like that...

Great job! God bless you!

07/23/15
Congratulations on a well deserved win.
07/23/15
Congratulations on your 6th place EC award. We need more Christians like Edward. Willing to look beyond the outer appearance and peer into the soul.
I love this. Well written, engaging and thought-provoking. Well done! And congrats!
07/23/15
I KNEW you could do it. Just excellent. Congrats, my dear friend. Fabulous characterization and description.
07/24/15
Great story. It reminds me a bit of a line from a Brandon Heath song, "about his own little world population me," and the day he actually 'saw' the woman who had been begging on the corner for the first time.
10/16/15
Gosh, Eloise made me so angry I wanted to smack her with a Bible lol! Bless her husband.

Well crafted. I thoroughly enjoyed the read.