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This is magnificently conceptualized and written. Powerful, compelling and wonderful . . .
Fascinating story. It really captured my attention.

Red Ink: From what I read, ugly tourist means a person who behaves badly in a foreign country. It doesn't refer to physical characteristics. I'm not sure if it fits the topic, but I really enjoyed reading it.
Excellent job with this.

Well done.

God bless~
This story caught me like a fish after a worm.
An unexpected twist. I would have liked to see a bit more tension in the stand-off - could you have expanded this scene further and cut words from the beginning?
Very creative and chilling story. Well written.
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