The Official Writing Challenge
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This poem had depth and insight into the Philistines of yester year and correlated to today's ugly tourist.
07/17/15
Excellent!

God bless~
07/18/15
Clever contrast with lovely verse. I liked the way you used Biblical imagery in the Goliath stanza but wondered whether the term 'virus' was a bit too modern for that setting.
07/20/15
Nice poem, good flow, easy to follow and good message.
07/23/15
Congratulations on your EC placing. I enjoyed your take on the topic.
Congratulations on your 5th place win in EC.
07/27/15
Your comparison here is stunning with these two Philistine strangers. Your creativity is wonderful. Many congrats on your (level award AND) Editor's Choice award. Great work!