The Official Writing Challenge
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Sam's bravery and his obedience to the Holy Spirit
is a lesson to us all. We see these 'tall scary' neighbors in the supermarket and this story is a lesson to us all.
I enjoyed this beautiful story.

Paragraph breaks will make this engrossing entry more readable.

I too have used capital letters to emphasize, as well as exclamation points.

Your descriptions are terrific, and you hit the topic right on target. Well done . . .
Brain freeze! I meant to emphasize that capital letters and/or exclamation points are unnecessary, as we feel the main characters emotions through your descriptive words . . .
The author reminds us to look into our brothers and sisters and help them with His gentle guidance. Sometimes we must listen with God's ears. Well done.
Powerfully moving.

God bless~
Great descriptions, entertaining, I could feel his fear.
Linzy's stories are always fun reading. She is very talented and wish her God's blessings for her future in writing.
Your writing is very easy to read, has a good flow and is quite interesting.

I liked the message as well as your use of the topic.