The Official Writing Challenge
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Sam's bravery and his obedience to the Holy Spirit
is a lesson to us all. We see these 'tall scary' neighbors in the supermarket and this story is a lesson to us all.
I enjoyed this beautiful story.

Paragraph breaks will make this engrossing entry more readable.

I too have used capital letters to emphasize, as well as exclamation points.

Your descriptions are terrific, and you hit the topic right on target. Well done . . .
Brain freeze! I meant to emphasize that capital letters and/or exclamation points are unnecessary, as we feel the main characters emotions through your descriptive words . . .
07/16/15
The author reminds us to look into our brothers and sisters and help them with His gentle guidance. Sometimes we must listen with God's ears. Well done.
07/17/15
Powerfully moving.

God bless~
07/17/15
Great descriptions, entertaining, I could feel his fear.
07/19/15
Linzy's stories are always fun reading. She is very talented and wish her God's blessings for her future in writing.
07/20/15
Your writing is very easy to read, has a good flow and is quite interesting.

I liked the message as well as your use of the topic.