The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a sweet story. I could picture the tension as Mom told the story. I did not some little things like saying you didn't remember, but then contradicting it by saying you didn't see the bike coming. It really wasn't a big deal though and I'd guess most people would never notice. I liked the ending. I'm guessing angels saved my son many times when he was little too. Nice job.
The perspective of this was different - I liked it. I could feel the panic of mom for sure. Nicely done.
You've captured the drama and the sense of emotion very well.