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06/09/15
While I can relate to what you are saying, the article seems to lack a clear flow or continuity. For me, it seems to jump around a bit. On the plus side, the comparison of a new dad to the loving Father is easy to relate to. I especially like the image of helping the child learn and grow rather than just giving him the toy.
06/10/15
Beautiful the way you compared your being a father to your Heavenly Father. You do those things and He does those things because that's what fathers do. Great insight. Enjoyed reading this article.
This was an inspiring devotional. The examples of your son made it very interesting. I loved the theme you decided on "He holds me."