The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the title and the true human side of this, showing just how vulnerable and failing we can be in our journey and life's battle. Praise the Lord that God's grace is sufficient and He covers us, strengthens us and helps us back on our feet to march on. Nice job!!!
I really enjoyed this, particularly the first stanza. I've seen this very beautiful gift for speaking straight to the heart of the matter in a gentle and accessible way in your writing so many times, and it's here too in spades. Thank you for encouraging me to keep on fighting the good fight!
05/25/15
Like a modern-day psalm, this begins with honesty and traces through self-sown dismay as you lay your heart (and ours) bare to God's scrutiny - before you move into the joy of his acceptance and trust. Well done.