The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/15
Great story - it is so believable! I hope you do well in the Challenge.
You are never boring! Betwixt you and your beautiful bride I never know what to expect. Excellent writing is a given. You do not write "poor efforts", my friend . . .
05/19/15
Oh, this is great. I was actually surprised to find it was fiction, because it read like a true story. You really captured the tension well. Great job!
Congratulations on ranking 5th in your level and 20 overall! Happy Dance!