The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/15
Lovely and creative - great wrap up in the end. Thanks for sharing.
05/19/15
I like the use of color in this.

I would have maybe focused on the colors a bit more, and maybe expanded this to other colors. For example, maybe we surrender green for envy. Or black for sin. Maybe orange for rage. What other "colors" could we surrender?

There are some great reminders here. Good job!
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