The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/15
Great story. Being from the upper Midwest, I especially related to your protagonist coping in the northland.
05/19/15
Oh, this is good!

To me, the last paragraph seems a bit... out of place. I think I was wondering more about what happened to the wolves at that point, than to her. You already gave us a clear picture of what happened to her.

You did a GREAT job with the wolves. You had me holding my breath, wondering what the outcome would be.
Congratulations on ranking 2nd in your level and 15 overall! Happy Dance!