The Official Writing Challenge
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05/14/15
That is really special how the Lord brought that Bible into your hands with the date. I enjoyed reading your testimony.
05/19/15
This is good.

It would be a bit easier to read if you divided this into smaller paragraphs.

What a surprise to find that old Bible, and what a treasure. Good job with this.