The Official Writing Challenge
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05/09/15
My heart goes out to you at this sorrowful time. I'm so sorry for the loss of your brother.

Your pain is palpable in your story, I pray peace and comfort as you mourn.

And, you will see him again...hold that thought no matter the pain, hold that thought, it's always helped me.

God bless you~
05/09/15
I'm so sorry for your terrible loss. It was brave of you to write honestly about losing your brother. I like your honesty too in that sometimes our time in prayer with the Lord isn't always sweet. Many times it does involve heartache and pain. Blessings to you and your family.
05/13/15
You wrote so passionately that I could feel your pain. Your loss is truly heart wrenching and I am sorry for your loss.

You wrote so vividly about your pain and grief that your article reminds us as readers that it is truly "sweet" that we can go to God even in our anger, and frustration.

Your writing was able to convey God's sweetness to care for you even in your sorrow: God's sweetness to comfort you in your grief.

You wrote even in your grief well enough to cause the reader to sympathize with your pain.

It's a sign of a great writer to be able to move the reader to emote as they read. So whether you place or not...you win! Great job!

I will use part of my sweet hour of prayer to pray to the God of all comfort on behalf of you and your family.